Sydney, your poem is awesome. I loved how you made it seem like a diary entry with the dates. I liked how you used imagery about the wounds he had. Overall, you did a great job!
I love your imagery in your poem. I liked how you were able to tell a story and you made it feel like i was right there. Putting the dates in the poem made it seem like a diary entry long ago. You did very well on your poem ,Sydney
Sydney, your poem is awesome. I loved how you made it seem like a diary entry with the dates. I liked how you used imagery about the wounds he had. Overall, you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteI love your imagery in your poem. I liked how you were able to tell a story and you made it feel like i was right there. Putting the dates in the poem made it seem like a diary entry long ago. You did very well on your poem ,Sydney
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